Liam Pym
UNIT 2: Assignment 2
Stage 1
The following is a report based on the research I have done into the different key features and elements of single camera productions and how we can use these elements in our own single camera production. The work presented below shows the progression I have made while creating this report, I have done this by asking another classmate to 'peer-asses' my work detailing how it can be improved etc, the stages after that shows the amendments and progression I made after receiving this feedback.
Stage 1 is the first draft for my own report, this report details the different elements on single camera productions which I have researched for UNIT 22 and details how I can use these elements in my own single camera production. The following is a PDF document showing my first draft of my report.
Stage 2
After writing my first draft for my report, I asked a class mate to peer asses my report in order to suggest possible improvements and amendments I could make in order to improve upon my work later on in my report. The following is a PDF of my report after being peer-assessed by another classmate: Natalia Adamou.
Stage 3
After receiving the suggested the feedback from my classmate, I read and took on board their response by making their suggested improvements to my report. The feedback I received was very beneficial as it enabled me to make my work more professional by adding additional information and addressing the financers directly. Furthermore, the feedback also enabled me to improve upon some spelling or grammar issues I had made. Here is a PDF of my report after making these improvements:
Stage 4
I then printed out my report after making the improvements in order to self audit my work further and suggest further improvements to my own work. I will then make my suggested improvements to my report after self-auditing it. Here is a PDF document showing my self-audited document:
Stage 5
The final stage me making further changes and amendments after self auditing my work in order to create my final report. The following is a PDF of my final report:
My own Marking
The following is evidence of my own marking and suggestions for improvements for another class member, Jason.